Wednesday, May 25, 2011

To Whom This Concerns: Mr Kleats

Ainsley Mackay
123 Main Street
Penticton, British Columbia,
V2A 3W1

May 25, 2011

Mr. Kleats
School 123 Main Street
Sportstown, British Columbia
V2A 1W3

Dear Mr. Kleats:

My Daughter Sola Mackay has been attending the K2 Freestyle Club for three years now, as she loves to attend practice and be taught new tricks by peers and coaches. I realize your on a very tight schedule as your senior team is going to Joss Super Sessions in Sweden but I have a few concerns regarding the younger team that Sola and others are in.

As Ive said before I realize your on a very tight schedule but practice has been confusing and disorganized. Lately the team hasn't practiced as one due to miss understanding of a time and location. A suggestion would be to print out a monthly calendar of practice, where its held, competitions and what time's. I could even help you make a schedule if you'd like. Also, Myself and a few other parents are a little concerned with your behaviour of favouring skiers due to the ability of there riding skills. As some kids feel neglected and hurt due to impatience and favouritism. Every single kid has potential in this sport to win, but that's not the point as it teaches every child to become an independent rider, make friends and most importantly have love for the sport. You may not know this but every kid looks up to you in some sort of way. I appreciate you for taking the time to read this letter as it means alot to me and the other parents. A responce on your thoughts would be lovely to hear, as everyone is willing to listen. Good luck going to Sweden! Have a save trip and win some golds!

Sincerely,



Ainsley Mackay

1 comment:

  1. 2 of 3 assignments. Letter has a good diplomatic tone, but needs extensive proofreading and spellchecking. Satirical essay has a good start but is incomplete.

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